Writing Task 2 – Band Score 6

IELTS writing task 2 essay with corrections and feedback

In this post, you will be able to view an essay example from a past student, with the corrections and feedback highlighted in red. 

Most of the students studying for the IELTS Test have said they find the IELTS Writing Tasks difficult. I have corrected hundreds of task 1 and 2 essays on various topics, giving estimated band scores and detailed feedback. There are also suggestions on how to improve for a higher band score. Take a look at this student essay example and see how it compares to your own writing.


Writing Task 2 Question

“A government has a responsibility to its citizens to ensure their safety. Therefore, some people think that the government should increase spending on defence but spend less on social benefits. To what extent do you agree?”

Here is the task 2 essay with corrections, suggestions, feedback and an estimated band score >>

ask 2 essay with corrections, suggestions, feedback and an estimated band score
IELTS band score 6 essay with corrections and feedback
IELTS writing task 2 academic band score 6 marking criteria

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