Writing Task 1 Academic – Band Score 9

IELTS writing task 1 academic band score 9 student essay

In this post, you will be able to view an essay example from a past student, with the corrections and feedback highlighted in red. 

Most of the students studying for the IELTS Test have said they find the IELTS Writing Tasks difficult. I have corrected hundreds of task 1 and 2 essays on various topics, giving estimated band scores and detailed feedback. There are also suggestions on how to improve for a higher band score. Take a look at this student essay example and see how it compares to your own writing.

Writing Task 1 Question 

IELTS pie chart question

Here is the task 1 essay with corrections, suggestions, feedback and an estimated band score >>

IELTS academic writing task 1 band score 9 student essay with corrections
IELTS task 1 academic band score 9 essay feedback

IELTS writing task 1 academic band score 9 marking criteria

Do you want to get your essays corrected by a highly experienced IELTS teacher? Then take a look at our writing correction service.

IELTS writing correction service

We hope you found this post useful in helping you to study for the IELTS Test. If you have any questions please let us know in the comments below or on the Facebook page.

The best way to keep up to date with posts like this is to like us on Facebook, then follow us on Instagram and Pinterest

Leave a Comment

Your email address will not be published. Required fields are marked *

Scroll to Top